DTA Entry 1

OMG this bae is so georgous ! I like her so much ! I'm planning to make a lots more entries for her !

When I see her, I immediatly imagine her story. Sorry for the very loooong story part !
And english is not my primary language so it must be very poorly written
If someone help me to re-write it and correct it I will gave him/her my soul ;w;

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 Species : Weaver

 Gender : Female

 Name : Yoru (night)

Nickname : The Raven

 Age : ~20 years old

 Favorite quote: "No one can escapes its fate. Resignation is the best solution."

Story :

Do not be fooled by its innocuous appearance. Yoru is not a simple Weaver.

Yoru birth and youth are dotted with many questions. Who are her parents ? Where did she come from ? How did she manage to be able to survive during all these years in these dangerous woods, away from all civilizations?
The young weaver was gathered at the age of 5 years by a small community of marginals weavers, outgoing, like a ghost, from the scary forest that bordered this strange town far from everything.

She grew peacefully. The family with whom she lived treated her as their own child and she had made many friends. Everything was perfect.

But it all started when she reached the age of 12 years.

Mysterious weavers wearing hoods and dark coats entered in the village. But aside Yoru, nobody asked who they were. Everyone knew. These individuals are the most absolute secret of this strange hidden village.
The weavers spoke. They came for the "new recruits". Every villagers nodded and all young people over 14 were designated as such.
Yoru wondered what was going on. She had never heard of any training and her family had never spoken to her about these individuals.
She was nevertheless relieved not to be part of the "chosen"

At least that's what she thought.

A hooded weavers firmly fixed her. She did not notice him at the beginning but when she did, her blood ran cold. This look... it was both strange and disturbing. Yoru felt to be dissected alive, almost feeling blades pierce her body. After a time he left the rest of the group and walked in direction of her family.

And after some negotiations, Yoru was forced to follow the recruits, being become one of them.

Chooses while she didn't reach the age for rejoin this mysterious organization, Yoru was formed in various arts of combat. Its implementation and her natural force quickly catapulted her into the top fighters and she particularly excelled in close combat. When she reached the age of 16, an initiation ritual was organized. The purpose? Recruits had to face each others.

In a fight to the death.

This fight was both dangerous and traumatic. But Yoru won and came to get rid of all recruits killing, in tears, all of those who had been his comrades a few hours earlier.
Their faces, their lifeless body reminded her that she had laughs with them, that she had shared a part of her life with them. Some liked her, the other esteemed her...

But it was all over now.

Her mind, weakened by such an event, began to crack, gently plunging her into a madness  she won't be able to exit. Her "exploit" allowed her to join the ranks of an assassin group which doesn't work for a great goal but for glory and money.

The final stage of her training.
And the discovery of the horrible secret of the village.

Yoru's life continued, interspersed with horrible and immoral acts, massacres, looting, fire in the name of wealth and power.

She quickly gained the nickname of "The Raven" because of her fighting style, precise and rapid like crows attacks.

Gradually, Yoru began to lose reason. It seemed that what she was doing at the beginning disgust her at the highest point, but she now began to appreciate these cruel acts.

The smell of blood.

The taste of blood.

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Weavers is a closed species and belongs to bananamantis